My Teaser Page

Posted: July 3, 2012 in Uncategorized

I’ve updated my Teaser page to include the entire 1000 word prologue to my story. If you wouldn’t mind, please take the time to read it and let me know what you think. Please be brutally honest if you can, I could could really use an honest critique and it can only help me in the future.


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  1. barnabyd says:

    I will read it. I’ve stopped letting people read my stuff so early in the process. It’s too early for criticism and really not helpful. You have to write for yourself, not for other people, and remember it’s your story and you can do what you want with it.

    • foolsmusings says:

      Thanks Barnaby, that’s probably the best critique I could get at this point. I’m just trying to figure out if there’s a story here, but I guess only I can know that.